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I didn't see a thread like this here... thought it might be nice to have one! Written anything lately that you'd like to share? My latest...

The Big Cross-Country

Funny how the landscape changes so slowly
you don’t really see.
One instant you’re driving through the delta,
flat and hot and familiar as your mother’s voice,
then dashed white lines stream past awhile
and you look up to find windmills
flailing arms like clumsy giants,
corn long-tasseled like a thousand Rapunzels
on vast swooping swells of well-turned earth,
suddenly knowing you're far from home.

The road takes so much of your attention
it's hard to notice each new change around you,
the occasional oak or cedar, the new colors
of tiny bright flowers whose names you don't know,
slowly growing in number until the corn that came before
is but a memory. Now kudzu creeps over the trees,
making shapes like clouds (look mom-- a giraffe,
no a dragon!) and the highway turns and stretches,
flowing over foothills, so different from the roads
you've left behind. And there's construction traffic,
barrels striped like prison clothes,
then a storm that turns your knuckles white on the wheel,
sends your mind running to long-forgotten gods
with prayers for safe passage,
and by the time you've come through it you're well and truly
in the mountains. Jutting stone and
mist like smoke and every glance out the window
a study in dark beauty,
awesome in its enormity.

It isn't that you don't know the changes will come --
of course they will, they must --
mountain isn't desert isn't sea.
Yet still it surprises you
when suddenly the road is flat again,
land empty of all but sagebrush
from one horizon to the next, desolate.
Sometimes it's hard not to miss the prettier roads,
the lovely corn, the ooh! ah! mountains.
The sandy ground burns your feet at the rest stop,
land barren all around.
You know the sea is worth the drive, though,
and you've come too far to turn back
so you get back in and keep going, legs stuck to the seat
and a/c on high and hoping you can make it the rest of the way,
wondering if you were wrong to take this route
after all.

Again as always it creeps up on you,
sagebrush slowly giving way
to stately pine processionals, standing at attention in sandy soil
to make way for your passage, salt in the breeze, and soon
gulls crying their welcome, crashing surf making you laugh
with surprise and delight as you catch that first glimpse through the dunes.
Tumbling eagerly onto the beach from the hot car,
towel in hand and wind in hair,
you stand for a moment suddenly overcome,
so glad you made the trip,
humbled and amazed by the vast
and beautiful sea.

Done traveling,
now we stroll green grounds,
among the stately stonework
and cobblestone paths,
so welcoming to busy squirrels and bright-winged fledgelings.
Many trips up many stairs with many boxes,
then the whirlwind as expected:
relocation registration convocation
and it's time to say goodbye.
I hug you once
twice
"I proud of you!" I say
then walk away across a campus blurred,
landscape forever changed.

--(hcm)

Good stuff, uS.

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uS, I really like that second one, wow!

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I found another from my past. If you don't like it, don't read it. :P

Numb

I feel nothing
I feel numb today
The world is dark
The world is black and grey

Scratch up my arms
As I search for feeling
Kill myself on the inside
My way of healing

Cut me open
Slit my vein
Drops of me everywhere
I find comfort in the pain

I scream as loud as I can
But I don't make a sound
I search for my voice
As I bounce off the ground

I feel nothing
I feel numb today
The world is dark
I like it this way

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I'm home for Christmas, found an old one:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Maybe it’s always been there in all of us
Since the initial frustration from liquid to air and we’ve never quite managed to shake it off.
It’s inside our cells.

Some of us cry and scream but it doesn’t do anything.
Some of us break things,
smash the world to shreds, fracture ourselves
It makes sense to believe it escapes through the cracks
But being in wrapped in plaster on the outside doesn’t heal what wraps us on the inside
That runs deeper than you’d suspect

You could watch me walk and never think it
You could see me talk and laugh, smile at people flickering by
Searching my face won’t give it away
You won’t find it there

I’ll give you a hint
You have to look up, above my head not inside it,
Up, up, up further, keep going
You’re almost there
And maybe now if you look closely
A little flicker, a shimmer, a difference in the air
Where it places a perimeter

Now you see it, now you know it
Maybe you recognise it, (it looks the same as yours?)
maybe you don’t
It doesn’t matter anyway
You’ve seen mine
You’ve proved it’s there

I always knew it was bigger than me

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Crying

Where tears sear
they too soothe
While they ruffle
they also smooth
Where they stain
they also cleanse
Often a tear isolates
but also befriends

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Jealousy
Thunder gathers, cracks, claps
Pitters, patters and applauds
Rapture wounds our ears
Where once we witnessed with half attention
Alas we now sense with calloused fingertips of memory
Flowered
Peddled, like a child’s tricycle
New for holy days, then by March
All those pinkish parts
Store clerk's promises discarded to dustbins
Or like olives in a Persian market
Soft, dark, moist
Wet warm whispers for pennies on the dollar
Careful, some have pits

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Charlie - I like the poetry!

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Bah, looking at old stuff on here makes me miss my writing class.
Not like its impossible for me to write outside of it, I just liked the prompts and concepts we wrote from. Oh well, maybe I'll start again, I haven't done anything in a long time.

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Ty, Josh! I like yours! Please do more.

uS you should do more! That one you did about boiling water was haunting; it inspired me!

After I Was Sane (For Eric)
I can recall when they called me crazy
To the day
They do not
Or they never say
When my lifeline was spliced to that of an immortal, a madman
When my falseness fell to the floor
I fumbled with all those dripping dreams, all those futile dreams
Always through yet another door it seems
First how brash, brazen
Then forever guarded round the fray
Endless gates of evil eternity
They don’t sing
They don’t love
They don't wail
Timelessness, unspoken, verily my masks would no longer veil
I stood naked
I remember
Do you?
Ah, I remember when I became insane
To the day
When I no longer bore your sins
I confessed and was reluctantly cleansed
I remember to the moment
You do not
When my dreams I gave to thee
To my beloved my little lot
Do you?
When I would no longer scream
When I would no longer dream
The dreamers still seething
And do not remember it seems
Forgive them
For their muffled screams
Forgive them
For they still hope
Forgive them
For they still dream

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uS - You write some great stuff as well!

Charlie - Another great poem! :) Also, you probably won't see anymore of my poetry. A) It sucks. B) I've never written a happy/light-hearted poem. They're all from my suicidal/I want to die/depressed days. It scares me seeing the things I said to myself and about myself. Ya know?

edit: Needless to say, I don't write anymore. I'm the happiest I've been in a long long time. I've surrounded myself with great, amazing, loving people that I love. I'm done with the ones and the things that were the worst for me.

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I'm no Edgar Allan Poe (sadly I can't write like him) but here are some lines I wrote a while back:

Way To Go

Way to go
You meant nothing
To her you were useless
Just emptiness in her way
You stopped her progress
And even pushed her back
Way to go
You fucked up
She would've done better without you
And would be farther ahead
You can't do anything right
You'll never learn
Way to go
You made her unhappy
And drove her insane
You brought her down
And you ruined her
Way to go
You useless fuck

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